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that could please correct this paragraph??

Please help me, I am learning English! work as human resources manager. A of my tasks is to choose the right person for the area of law. I'm responsible for hiring people in our winery in Argentina. Another duty is always to study new things to improve the quality of recruitment ……………… ……………… . Since 1985 we are investing especially in European countries, since they pay less tax the U.S.. We are building new wineries there, but our main plant in Argentina. We'll have the latest generation of machines to such research and create new wines entering the market. We are implementing new strategies to wine lovers around the world to buy our unique specialties through Internet.

The first paragraph is fine. The last sentence of paragraph also good. I put the first part of the second paragraph below, my corrections in brackets []. ……. Since 1985 [have invested and have been investing] in European countries, since they pay less tax than the U.S.. We are building new wineries there, but our [Home installation is] in Argentina. We'll have the latest generation of machines to and make new types of research of wines to introduce to the market. <- This is a little awkward to say in English, but I'm not sure what you are trying to say I can not fix it. You English excellent, the paragraph is very easy to understand!

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